First thing I notice which will get you into trouble with folksy you have are advertising your ebay shop in your folksy shop this is now allowed.
You need to fill in your meet the maker bit as well.
You have pretty hair clips but your photo’s are pretty dark I would suggest a lighter background to make your items really pop. The listing says there’s a double pronged clip on the back but you don’t have a photo of the back. I think a customer would want to see that clip and sew how well it’s been secured.
Lovely butterfly necklace but the overall photo the main is partial out of focus yes I can see the butterfly but potential customers will need to see clearly the whole necklace, either as a whole or as individual photos’ of each section.
But from what I can see very pretty
all the best